Excerpt from Eragon
Book One in the Inheritance cycle
by Christopher Paolini
PALANCAR VALLEY
The
sun rose the next morning with a glorious conflagration of pink and
yellow. The air was fresh, sweet, and very cold. Ice edged the streams,
and small pools were completely frozen over. After a breakfast of
porridge, Eragon returned to the glen and examined the charred area.
The morning light revealed no new details, so he started for home.
The
rough game trail was faintly worn and, in places, nonexistent. Because
it had been forged by animals, it often backtracked and took long
detours. Yet for all its flaws, it was still the fastest way out of the
mountains.
The
Spine was one of the only places that King Galbatorix could not call
his own. Stories were still told about how half his army dis-appeared
after marching into its ancient forest. A cloud of mis-fortune and bad
luck seemed to hang over it. Though the trees grew tall and the sky
shone brightly, few people could stay in the Spine for long without
suffering an accident. Eragon was one of those few—not through any
particular gift, it seemed to him, but because of persistent vigilance
and sharp reflexes. He had hiked in the mountains for years, yet he was
still wary of them. Every time he thought they had surrendered their
secrets, something happened to upset his understanding of them—like the
stone’s appearance.
He
kept up a brisk pace, and the leagues steadily disappeared. In late
evening he arrived at the edge of a precipitous ravine. The Anora River
rushed by far below, heading to Palancar Valley. Gorged with
hundreds of tiny streams, the river was a brute force, battling against
the rocks and boulders that barred its way. A low rumble filled the
air.
He camped in a thicket near the ravine and watched the moonrise before going to bed.
It grew colder over the next day and a half. Eragon traveled quickly
and saw little of the wary wildlife. A bit past noon, he heard the
Igualda Falls blanketing everything with the dull sound of a thou-sand
splashes. The trail led him onto a moist slate outcropping, which the
river sped past, flinging itself into empty air and down mossy cliffs.
Before
him lay Palancar Valley, exposed like an unrolled map. The base of the
Igualda Falls, more than a half-mile below, was the northernmost point
of the valley. A little ways from the falls was Carvahall, a cluster of
brown buildings. White smoke rose from the chimneys, defiant of the
wilderness around it. At this height, farms were small square patches
no bigger than the end of his finger. The land around them was tan or
sandy, where dead grass swayed in the wind. The Anora River wound from
the falls toward Palancar’s southern end, reflecting great strips of
sunlight. Far in the distance it flowed past the village Therinsford
and the lonely mountain Utgard. Beyond that, he knew only that it
turned north and ran to the sea.
After
a pause, Eragon left the outcropping and started down the trail,
grimacing at the descent. When he arrived at the bottom, soft dusk was
creeping over everything, blurring colors and shapes into gray masses.
Carvahall’s lights shimmered nearby in the twilight; the houses cast
long shadows. Aside from Therinsford, Carvahall was the only village in
Palancar Valley. The settlement was secluded and surrounded by harsh,
beautiful land. Few traveled here except merchants and trappers.
The
village was composed of stout log buildings with low roofs— some
thatched, others shingled. Smoke billowed from the chimneys, giving the
air a woody smell. The buildings had wide porches where people gathered
to talk and conduct business. Occasionally a window brightened as a
candle or lamp was lit. Eragon heard men talking loudly in the evening
air while wives scurried to fetch their husbands, scolding them for
being late.
Eragon
wove his way between the houses to the butcher’s shop, a broad,
thick-beamed building. Overhead, the chimney belched black smoke.
He
pushed the door open. The spacious room was warm and well lit by a fire
snapping in a stone fireplace. A bare counter stretched across the far
side of the room. The floor was strewn with loose straw. Everything was
scrupulously clean, as if the owner spent his leisure time digging in
obscure crannies for minuscule pieces of filth. Behind the counter
stood the butcher Sloan. A small man, he wore a cotton shirt and a
long, bloodstained smock. An impressive array of knives swung from his
belt. He had a sallow, pockmarked face, and his black eyes were
suspicious. He polished the counter with a ragged cloth.
Sloan’s
mouth twisted as Eragon entered. “Well, the mighty hunter joins the
rest of us mortals. How many did you bag this time?”
“None,”
was Eragon’s curt reply. He had never liked Sloan. The butcher always
treated him with disdain, as if he were something unclean. A widower,
Sloan seemed to care for only one person—his daughter, Katrina, on whom
he doted.
“I’m
amazed,” said Sloan with affected astonishment. He turned his back on
Eragon to scrape something off the wall. “And that’s your reason for
coming here?”
“Yes,” admitted Eragon uncomfortably.
“If
that’s the case, let’s see your money.” Sloan tapped his fingers when
Eragon shifted his feet and remained silent. “Come on— either you have
it or you don’t. Which is it?”
“I don’t really have any money, but I do—”
“What,
no money?” the butcher cut him off sharply. “And you expect to buy
meat! Are the other merchants giving away their wares? Should I just
hand you the goods without charge? Besides,” he said abruptly, “it’s
late. Come back tomorrow with money. I’m closed for the day.”
Eragon
glared at him. “I can’t wait until tomorrow, Sloan. It’ll be worth your
while, though; I found something to pay you with.” He pulled out the
stone with a flourish and set it gently on the scarred counter, where
it gleamed with light from the dancing flames.
“Stole it is more likely,” muttered Sloan, leaning forward with an interested expression.
Ignoring the comment, Eragon asked, “Will this be enough?”
Sloan
picked up the stone and gauged its weight speculatively. He ran his
hands over its smoothness and inspected the white veins. With a
calculating look, he set it down. “It’s pretty, but how much is it
worth?”
“I don’t know,” admitted Eragon, “but no one would have gone to the trouble of shaping it unless it had some value.”
“Obviously,”
said Sloan with exaggerated patience. “But how much value? Since you
don’t know, I suggest that you find a trader who does, or take my offer
of three crowns.”
“That’s
a miser’s bargain! It must be worth at least ten times that,” protested
Eragon. Three crowns would not even buy enough meat to last a week.
Sloan shrugged. “If you don’t like my offer, wait until the traders arrive. Either way, I’m tired of this conversation.”
The
traders were a nomadic group of merchants and entertainers who visited
Carvahall every spring and winter. They bought what-ever excess the
villagers and local farmers had managed to grow or make, and sold what
they needed to live through another year: seeds, animals, fabric, and
supplies like salt and sugar.
But
Eragon did not want to wait until they arrived; it could be a while,
and his family needed the meat now. “Fine, I accept,” he snapped.
“Good, I’ll get you the meat. Not that it matters, but where did you find this?”
“Two nights ago in the Spine—”
“Get
out!” demanded Sloan, pushing the stone away. He stomped furiously to
the end of the counter and started scrubbing old bloodstains off a
knife.
“Why?” asked Eragon. He drew the stone closer, as if to protect it from Sloan’s wrath.
“I
won’t deal with anything you bring back from those damned mountains!
Take your sorcerer’s stone elsewhere.” Sloan’s hand sud-denly slipped
and he cut a finger on the knife, but he seemed not to notice. He
continued to scrub, staining the blade with fresh blood.
“You refuse to sell to me!”
“Yes! Unless you pay with coins,” Sloan growled, and hefted the knife, sidling away. “Go, before I make you!”
The
door behind them slammed open. Eragon whirled around, ready for more
trouble. In stomped Horst, a hulking man. Sloan’s daughter, Katrina—a
tall girl of sixteen—trailed behind him with a determined expression.
Eragon was surprised to see her; she usu-ally absented herself from any
arguments involving her father. Sloan glanced at them warily, then
started to accuse Eragon. “He won’t—”
“Quiet,”
announced Horst in a rumbling voice, cracking his knuckles at the same
time. He was Carvahall’s smith, as his thick neck and scarred leather
apron attested. His powerful arms were bare to the elbow; a great
expanse of hairy muscular chest was vis-ible through the top of his
shirt. A black beard, carelessly trimmed, roiled and knotted like his
jaw muscles. “Sloan, what have you done now?”
“Nothing.” He gave Eragon a murderous gaze, then spat, “This... boycame
in here and started badgering me. I asked him to leave, but he won’t
budge. I even threatened him and he still ignored me!” Sloan seemed to
shrink as he looked at Horst.
“Is this true?” demanded the smith.
“No!”
replied Eragon. “I offered this stone as payment for some meat, and he
accepted it. When I told him that I’d found it in the Spine, he refused
to even touch it. What difference does it make where it came from?”
Horst
looked at the stone curiously, then returned his attention to the
butcher. “Why won’t you trade with him, Sloan? I’ve no love for the
Spine myself, but if it’s a question of the stone’s worth, I’ll back it
with my own money.”
The
question hung in the air for a moment. Then Sloan licked his lips and
said, “This is my own store. I can do whatever I want.”
Katrina stepped out from behind Horst and tossed back her auburn hair like a spray of molten copper. “Father, Eragon iswilling to pay. Give him the meat, and then we can have supper.”
Sloan’s eyes narrowed dangerously. “Go back to the house; this is none of your business. . . . I said go!” Katrina’s face hardened, then she marched out of the room with a stiff back.
Eragon
watched with disapproval but dared not interfere. Horst tugged at his
beard before saying reproachfully, “Fine, you can deal with me. What
were you going to get, Eragon?” His voice reverberated through the
room.
“As much as I could.”
Horst
pulled out a purse and counted out a pile of coins. “Give me your best
roasts and steaks. Make sure that it’s enough to fill Eragon’s pack.”
The butcher hesitated, his gaze darting between Horst and Eragon. “Not
selling to me would be a very bad idea,” stated Horst.
Glowering
venomously, Sloan slipped into the back room. A frenzy of chopping,
wrapping, and low cursing reached them. After several uncomfortable
minutes, he returned with an armful of wrapped meat. His face was
expressionless as he accepted Horst’s money, then proceeded to clean
his knife, pretending that they were not there.
Horst
scooped up the meat and walked outside. Eragon hurried behind him,
carrying his pack and the stone. The crisp night air rolled over their
faces, refreshing after the stuffy shop.
“Thank you, Horst. Uncle Garrow will be pleased.”
Horst
laughed quietly. “Don’t thank me. I’ve wanted to do that for a long
time. Sloan’s a vicious troublemaker; it does him good to be humbled.
Katrina heard what was happening and ran to fetch me. Good thing I
came—the two of you were almost at blows. Unfortunately, I doubt he’ll
serve you or any of your family the next time you go in there, even if
you do have coins.”
“Why
did he explode like that? We’ve never been friendly, but he’s always
taken our money. And I’ve never seen him treat Katrina that way,” said
Eragon, opening the top of the pack.
Horst shrugged. “Ask your uncle. He knows more about it than I do.”
Eragon
stuffed the meat into his pack. “Well, now I have one more reason to
hurry home . . . to solve this mystery. Here, this is rightfully
yours.” He proffered the stone.
Horst
chuckled. “No, you keep your strange rock. As for payment, Albriech
plans to leave for Feinster next spring. He wants to become a master
smith, and I’m going to need an assistant. You can come and work off
the debt on your spare days.”
Eragon
bowed slightly, delighted. Horst had two sons, Albriech and Baldor,
both of whom worked in his forge. Taking one’s place was a generous
offer. “Again, thank you! I look forward to working with you.” He was
glad that there was a way for him to pay Horst. His uncle would never
accept charity. Then Eragon remembered what his cousin had told him
before he had left on the hunt. “Roran wanted me to give Katrina a
message, but since I can’t, can you get it to her?”
“Of course.”
“He wants her to know that he’ll come into town as soon as the merchants arrive and that he will see her then.”
“That all?”
Eragon
was slightly embarrassed. “No, he also wants her to know that she is
the most beautiful girl he has ever seen and that he thinks of nothing
else.”
Horst’s face broke into a broad grin, and he winked at Eragon. “Getting serious, isn’t he?”
“Yes,
sir,” Eragon answered with a quick smile. “Could you also give her my
thanks? It was nice of her to stand up to her father for me. I hope
that she isn’t punished because of it. Roran would be furious if I got
her into trouble.”
“I
wouldn’t worry about it. Sloan doesn’t know that she called me, so I
doubt he’ll be too hard on her. Before you go, will you sup with us?”
“I’m
sorry, but I can’t. Garrow is expecting me,” said Eragon, tying off the
top of the pack. He hoisted it onto his back and started down the road,
raising his hand in farewell.
The
meat slowed him down, but he was eager to be home, and renewed vigor
filled his steps. The village ended abruptly, and he left its warm
lights behind. The pearlescent moon peeked over the mountains, bathing
the land in a ghostly reflection of daylight. Everything looked
bleached and flat.
Near
the end of his journey, he turned off the road, which con-tinued south.
A simple path led straight through waist-high grass and up a knoll,
almost hidden by the shadows of protective elm trees. He crested the
hill and saw a gentle light shining from his home.
The
house had a shingled roof and a brick chimney. Eaves hung over the
whitewashed walls, shadowing the ground below. One side of the enclosed
porch was filled with split wood, ready for the fire. A jumble of farm
tools cluttered the other side.
The
house had been abandoned for half a century when they moved in after
Garrow’s wife, Marian, died. It was ten miles from Carvahall, farther
than anyone else’s. People considered the dis-tance dangerous because
the family could not rely on help from the village in times of trouble,
but Eragon’s uncle would not listen. A hundred feet from the
house, in a dull-colored barn, lived two horses—Birka and Brugh—with
chickens and a cow. Sometimes there was also a pig, but they had been
unable to afford one this year. A wagon sat wedged between the stalls.
On the edge of their fields, a thick line of trees traced along the
Anora River.
He
saw a light move behind a window as he wearily reached the porch.
“Uncle, it’s Eragon. Let me in.” A small shutter slid back for a
second, then the door swung inward.
Garrow
stood with his hand on the door. His worn clothes hung on him like rags
on a stick frame. A lean, hungry face with intense eyes gazed out from
under graying hair. He looked like a man who had been partly mummified
before it was discovered that he was still alive. “Roran’s sleeping,”
was his answer to Eragon’s inquiring glance.
A
lantern flickered on a wood table so old that the grain stood up in
tiny ridges like a giant fingerprint. Near a woodstove were rows of
cooking utensils tacked onto the wall with homemade nails. A second
door opened to the rest of the house. The floor was made of boards
polished smooth by years of tramping feet.
Eragon
pulled off his pack and took out the meat. “What’s this? Did you buy
meat? Where did you get the money?” asked his uncle harshly as he saw
the wrapped packages.
Eragon took a breath before answering. “No, Horst bought it for us.”
“You
let him pay for it? I told you before, I won’t beg for our food. If we
can’t feed ourselves, we might as well move into town. Before you can
turn around twice, they’ll be sending us used clothes and asking if
we’ll be able to get through the winter.” Garrow’s face paled with
anger.
“I didn’t
accept charity,” snapped Eragon. “Horst agreed to let me work off the
debt this spring. He needs someone to help him because Albriech is
going away.”
“And
where will you get the time to work for him? Are you going to ignore
all the things that need to be done here?” asked Garrow, forcing his
voice down.
Eragon
hung his bow and quiver on hooks beside the front door. “I don’t know
how I’ll do it,” he said irritably. “Besides, I found something that
could be worth some money.” He set the stone on the table.
Garrow
bowed over it: the hungry look on his face became ravenous, and his
fingers moved with a strange twitch. “You found this in the Spine?”
“Yes,”
said Eragon. He explained what had happened. “And to make matters
worse, I lost my best arrow. I’ll have to make more before long.” They
stared at the stone in the near darkness.
“How
was the weather?” asked his uncle, lifting the stone. His hands
tightened around it like he was afraid it would suddenly disappear.
“Cold,” was Eragon’s reply. “It didn’t snow, but it froze each night.”
Garrow
looked worried by the news. “Tomorrow you’ll have to help Roran finish
harvesting the barley. If we can get the squash picked, too, the frost
won’t bother us.” He passed the stone to Eragon. “Here, keep it. When
the traders come, we’ll find out what it’s worth. Selling it is
probably the best thing to do. The less we’re involved with magic, the
better. . . . Why did Horst pay for the meat?”
It took only a moment for Eragon to explain his argument with Sloan. “I just don’t understand what angered him so.”
Garrow
shrugged. “Sloan’s wife, Ismira, went over the Igualda Falls a year
before you were brought here. He hasn’t been near the Spine since, nor
had anything to do with it. But that’s no reason to refuse payment. I
think he wanted to give you trouble.”
Eragon
swayed blearily and said, “It’s good to be back.” Garrow’s eyes
softened, and he nodded. Eragon stumbled to his room, pushed the stone
under his bed, then fell onto the mattress. Home. For the first time since before the hunt, he relaxed completely as sleep overtook him.
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